2009/09/30

5 best sugestions

We worked on finding good suggestions for this class from classmates' posts of Portfolio for Writing III today’s class. I found five best suggestions. Here are the suggestions below.

First I plan to follow UNO! “to include medias” (Uno, 07.20) because that will help to make fun blog and we can interest everyone in the contents.

Second one is from Buzz Light Blog Yeah named Light. She wrote that “to use more different words” (Light, 07.08). I think that is the best way to progress our vocabulary ability.

Third I choose yumi’s suggestion from yumi. She wrote that “to devise more” (yumi, 07.08). I think that will help to make cute blog and everyone can easy to see the blog.

Next one is takako’s suggestion. She suggested that “to get accurate information” (Takako H, 07.14). I think that is the best way to enhance our speaking skill.

The last one is from yukari’s new blog named Yukari. She wrote that “to contribute a wider content to the blog” (Yukari, 07.08). I think that is help to make great blog and everyone want to read our blog.

I will keep in my mind that suggestion when I wrote blog this semester.
(200 words, total: 1797 words)

2009/09/01

Starbucks Coffee

I went to Starbucks Coffee with Yui today.

I drank a CRÈME BRULEE FRAPPUCCINO ↓

and ate it ↓
It is very delicious and I felt happily. Yui and I talked about each other. After we left Starbucks Coffee, we were hanging out in the streets. I had a part-time job after that, so I was back. I wanted to stay with Yui longer.
(64 words, total: 1597 words)

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